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kids in door

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Description

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Image size
478x800px 134.28 KB
Make
PENTAX Corporation
Model
PENTAX K10D
Shutter Speed
1/180 second
Aperture
F/4.0
Focal Length
17 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Aug 30, 2008, 4:37:06 PM
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

This is a photo that reaches the outskirts of being a drawing. The way you have pushed this (contrast, curves, levels, and desaturation) has given the image a charcoal drawn feeling. The little boy’s face, that unfortunately is not the first thing that catches the eye, has a priceless picturesque expression. This image might benefit by a tighter crop. You may lose detail of the geometrically framing doors but you will gain focus on the faces. Overall, I get a dark retro feeling and if that is your intention you have done lovely. I would explore the "haunted house/ evil kid" idea with it as well.